22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://youtu.be/7Wo25P0A71c
In this video, what was important to me was to get my point across clearly. I felt I had memorized my speech very well, and I included more hand motions and nonverbal communication. The feedback I had received on my previous post has really made a difference on my perspective of my business idea. I felt very comfortable in front of the camera but I did have to practice a few times before getting it right. I feel like my tone of voice really describes how strongly I feel about my business idea. The one thing I am concerned about is how well you guys will be able to hear me, I tried speaking very loud but I am not sure if the video captured it as loud.
Emma, congratulations on your last speech! I watched your previous pitches and this one is by far the best. It also shows to everyone else that the more we practice, the better we will be at anything we do in our lives. Your business idea is great and I hope you work on it after we are done with this class!
ReplyDeleteEmma! Great Job on the pitch! I can definitely tel that you have improved a long way from your first speech. You included a lot of the key points about your idea and improved on a lot of areas overall. After listening I can definitely feel that the business idea you have seems to be a great one.
ReplyDeleteHi Emma! Great job with your pitch! You seemed very passionate about your idea and I think this really sold it. I would maybe find some more facts or data to mention in order to back up your position, and find something else to record with like your laptop so its easier to hear you. I had a problem with this too. You did a great job though and it was a convincing argument!
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